Yooo Rupert this looks awesome so far! I love the use of the many arms to portray your message, and the placement of the ‘bride’ in the middle is very effective in terms of composition. One thing that is distracting to me is the fact that the man is quite a bit higher, which makes it look like he might be on a ledge of some kind? (which is totally possible in this scene) but its slightly confusing. I think if he was a little lower, it might look more like it’s incorporated into the background, but overall this is super nice! Bravo!
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Yooo Rupert this looks awesome so far! I love the use of the many arms to portray your message, and the placement of the ‘bride’ in the middle is very effective in terms of composition. One thing that is distracting to me is the fact that the man is quite a bit higher, which makes it look like he might be on a ledge of some kind? (which is totally possible in this scene) but its slightly confusing. I think if he was a little lower, it might look more like it’s incorporated into the background, but overall this is super nice! Bravo!
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